马来文达人进来教我马来文......

风满楼

我尝试理解和翻译以下的马来文歌词，有错误的地方请解释说明：

Jangan diucap selamat tinggal
Shades

Ku mencari -ku mencari apakah salahku
我寻找-我寻找自己的过错

Kau buat ku termenung keseorangan
你令我独自沉思

Dalam diri sangsi akhirnya begini
心中疑惑最后竟是如此*

Perpisahan tak ku duga hooo
离别非我所料

Ku mengerti ku fahami keputusan diri  
我了解，我明白自己的结局

Biar saja aku sebegini
就只容许我这么多**

Permintaan terakhirku jangan kau lafazkan
我最后的要求， 你别说出口**

Simpan saja kata-kata  ohooo
把话留住

Jangan diucap selamat tinggal  
别让再见说出口

Jangan kau ucap selamat tinggal  
你别说再见

Jangan diucap selamat tinggal
Kepada ku...  
别对我说再见

Walaupun seketika, walaupun sekelip mata  
即使只有片刻，即使只是瞬间

Simpan saja kata-kata keakhir hayat yang ada (ulang 2 kali)
把生命最后一刻的话留住***

（翻于 04/01/2012)
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下面三句不太确定：
心中疑惑最后竟是如此*
就只容许我这么多我最后的要求， 你别说出口**
把生命最后一刻的话留住***

为什么 Jangan diucap selamat tinggal
diucap 用被动式？

最后一句：keakhir hayat yang ada
是不是表示他们的分离是因对对方的逝去？

风满楼

借个空间保存英语歌词翻译......

One Day - Matisyahu

sometimes I lay under the moon
有时候我躺在月光下
and thank God I'm breathing   
感谢上苍我依然活着
then I pray don't take me soon
然后祈求上苍，别太快带我离去
cause i'm here for a reason
因为我来到这里有个原因
sometimes in my tears I drown
有时泪水把我淹没了
but I never let it get me down
但我绝不因此而沮丧
so when negativity surrounds
所以当我意志消沉
I know some day it'll all turn around
我知道有一天这一切将会改变
because all my live I've been waiting for
因为我一生都在期待
I've been praying for
都在祈祷
for the people to say
人们最终会说
that we don‘t wanna fight no more
我们不再斗争
there'll be no more wars
不再有战争
and our children will play
one day x6   
而我们的孩子有一天将会嬉戏
it's not about win or lose
谁胜谁负，意义何在
we all lose
when they feed on the souls of the innocent,   
blood drenched pavement
当它们吞噬了无辜的灵魂、沾满鲜血的道路
我们都失败了
keep on moving though the waters stay raging
尽管波涛汹涌，仍继续前进
in this maze you can lose your way (your way)
在这迷宫里你会失去方向
it might drive you crazy
but don’t let it faze you no way (no way)   
这可能把你激怒，但别让自己感到困惑
sometimes in my tears I drown
有时泪水把我淹没了
but I never let it get me down
但我绝不因此而沮丧
so when negativity surrounds
所以当我意志消沉
I know some day it'll all turn around
我知道有一天这一切将会改变
because all my live I've been waiting for
因为我一生都在期待
I've been praying for
都在祈祷
for the people to say
人们最终会说
that we don‘t wanna fight no more
我们不再斗争
there'll be no more wars
不再有战争
and our children will play
one day x6
而我们的孩子有一天将会嬉戏
one day this all will change
有一天这一切将会改变
treat people the same
人们一视同仁
stop with the violence
停止了暴力
down with the hate
放下了仇恨
one day we'll all be free
有一天我们将得到解放
and proud to be
并感到自豪
under the same sun
singing songs of freedom like
one day x4
在同一个太阳下唱着自由的歌，就像“有一天”
all my live I've been waiting for
我一生都在期待
I've been praying for
都在祈祷
for the people to say
人们最终会说
that we don't wanna fight no more
我们不再斗争
there'll be no more wars
不再有战争

(翻于03/01/2012)

ben_castiel

回复 2# 风满楼

能幫我翻譯歌詞嗎？

风满楼

回复  风满楼
能幫我翻譯歌詞嗎？
ben_castiel 发表于 5-1-2012 09:29 AM

可以尝试，但我只是新手......

ben_castiel

回复 4# 风满楼

麻煩你了
Chasing The Light - Mat Kearney

Every bridge that keeps on burning
Every leaf that you keep on turning
Every road that you find uncertain
Pray for you now
Baby that you’ll figure it out
As you keep
Chasing the light

Remember back when you slept on my floor
Blow up mattress down by the door
10 pounds heavier from wasted time
We didn’t know we were way out of line
From the moment that you
popped out on the scene
Hard to know what you got or you’re meant to be
Everything that you know goes flying
From Jonny O’s coach to a gypsy bus island
Holding hands with people in life
Till they walk away saying no good byes
And you keep saying that you’re running down a dream
But you don’t know where it leads
As you keep chasing the light

Every bridge that keep on burning
Every leaf that you keep on turning
Every road that you find uncertain
Pray for you now
Baby that you’ll figure it out
Every hope and dream that’s dying
Every time that i see you crying
Every step that you keep on climbing
Pray for you now
Baby that you figure it out
As you keep
Chasing the light

Got the call that you sent out yesterday
40 lines and a fallout holiday
On my knees with the weight that was mine
Think about you when I’m driving at night
Familiar sounds and it takes me right back there
Bridge street and the beat in the summer air
Was it easier to watch you feet
And never deal with the hell that a young boy sees
Where liquor runs thicker than blood
On your own when push comes to shove
Before we had these mouths to feed
With innocent dreams… while you keep
Chasing the light

Every bridge that keep on burning
Every leaf that you keep on turning
Every road that you find uncertain
Pray for you now
Baby that you’ll figure it out
Every hope and dream that’s dying
Every time that I see you crying
Every step that you keep on climbing
Pray for you now
Baby that you figure it out
As you keep
Chasing the light

Remember hearing Dylan’s first songs first
Remember writing down a train wreck verse
We were running down Franklin High School lights
Burning alive in a Chevrolet night
Remember driving out to Salton Sea
Dreaming bout all we thought we’d be
One way tickets into southern lights
Slammed the door and said goodbye, goodbye

Every bridge that keep on burning
Every leaf that you keep on turning
Every road that you find uncertain
Pray for you now
Baby that you’ll figure it out
Every hope and dream that’s dying
Every time that I see you crying
Every step that you keep on climbing
Pray for you now
Baby that you figure it out
As you keep
Chasing the light

风满楼

回复 5# ben_castiel
哗！这个难度蛮高的，因为我不熟悉创作人的背景，而他又喜欢使用天马行空+随意/random的表达方式，加上英文的一词多义，有时难以判断某个词是指哪个定义......但有时间我还是准备尝试，不过我只能修修补补试图把它拼凑出来，翻译出来的应该很惨不忍睹，所以先做好心理准备

ben_castiel

回复 6# 风满楼

加油啦！