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lonely_wolf

万里人丛中幸遇，

綿綿話語共谈心。

玫瑰相赠把心许，

愿似鸳鸯双入林。

无邪

看了这首诗
令我感到心里不舒服
在人丛中邂逅
然后又在人丛中绵绵细语
过后拿玫瑰花相赠把心许
这样的意境实在不浪漫
最后希望两个人进入森林
入林做什么？
难道现在的人流行在人群中相赠玫瑰么？

lonely_wolf

人丛中邂逅 doesn't mean that in a open place meet some one, here mean u meet some one in this world. In world there got many people.
When did I wrote 人丛中绵绵细语? Since u already not understand that first line, 2nd line u not understand at all.綿綿話語共谈心 can be any place, through phone, face to face, etc.
玫瑰花相赠把心许not concern with ramantic or not, is mean that give some thing(rose) to let her know I like her.
Last line more worst, 愿似鸳鸯双入林 doesn't mean that u think to be 鸳鸯入林. Do u know what is 鸳鸯? The meaning of 鸳鸯 represented?
To make it clear, the 林 in last line not forest, is "hong shu lin".

Sorry for cannot using chinese chracter here.

chuaneow

无邪 于 2-3-2005 04:30 PM  说 :
看了这首诗
令我感到心里不舒服
在人丛中邂逅
然后又在人丛中绵绵细语
过后拿玫瑰花相赠把心许
这样的意境实在不浪漫
最后希望两个人进入森林
入林做什么？
难道现在的人流行在人群中相赠玫瑰么？

嘻嘻， 这位无邪先生（还是小姐？)， 看来阁下对于律诗是没认识吧。。。如果不懂其中意境， 请教请教版主， 他应该会很乐意解释给你听的。至于阁下的了解， 嘻嘻， 就请别娱乐人了吧。。。这样是会笑坏肚子的。。。