有没人可以帮我检查一下我的ＧＲＡＭＭＡＲ和提高这短文的清楚性。。。谢谢

shilly88

I spoke to Jason again today about the request to help me with the siminar,and as this is conflict with our event, our help will be limited to helping with having some marketing material ready for the seminar and arranging for some printing services here, that is going to be much easier and cheaper for Jason this way.
It is not my attention to make money by providing marketing support service, and we will be very happy if we can limit this as much as possible, as we have our own sales support objectives to meet. But, should we are required to do that, we are going to loose money doing it. As we have calculated it before in relation to some of the development projects, own costs per hour are $30 and if we are charged that, we do not make any money. $3 will be the hourly rate we will invoice Jason for the services, plus any related expenses. I trust this is fair.

Danny_yi

原帖由 shilly88 于 1-2-2009 05:09 PM 发表
I spoke to Jason again today about the request to help me with the siminar,and as this is conflict with our event, our help will be limited to helping with having some marketing material ready for the ...

你可以写华语吗？这样才可以更清楚你想表达的东西。

gtel

原帖由 Danny_yi 于 1-2-2009 05:36 PM 发表


你可以写华语吗？这样才可以更清楚你想表达的东西。

你写华文，我们在帮你翻译会更准确。

好热心

有批改的，
有英文文法，看笑话学英文，和性格测验。。。