急**哪個大大可幫我看看這英文句子有什么錯誤

bubu1010

A bus carrying six passengers overturned outside the MacDonald’s store on Smith street at 8.30am yesterday after being side-swiped by a commercial van towing a trailer.

[ 本帖最后由 bubu1010 于 8-5-2009 04:14 PM 编辑 ]

kin_na

自己做啦！做么酱多人来cari找人帮忙做功课的！:@ :@ :@

bubu1010

我是做了 = = 想要再三的看看有沒有更好的答案 = =

提拉米蘇

肯定有错
但是我无法肯定我的是对的

bubu1010

沒關系 不肯定也不要緊 方便的話請打出你覺得對的答案好嗎
我只想看看其他有可能的答案

风满楼

原帖由 bubu1010 于 8-5-2009 03:03 PM 发表
A bus carrying six passengers overturned outside the MacDonald’s store on Smith street at 8.30am yesterday after being side-swiped by a commercial van towing a trailer.

小错误...
MacDonald's ----> McDonald's  (麦当劳叔叔看到可能会不爽）
Smith street ----> Smith Street
side-swiped ----> sideswiped

bubu1010

以下兩個句子呢？

The testimony of former Brisbane Lord Mayor Sally Ann Atkinson was collaborated in part by letters from residents concerned with the encroaching development.

Middle Valley High School will be the sole benefactor when former Farmfest Corporation chairman Bob Greens estate is settled.

风满楼

原帖由 bubu1010 于 9-5-2009 05:00 PM 发表
Middle Valley High School will be the sole benefactor when former Farmfest Corporation chairman Bob Greens estate is settled.

如果 Middle Valley High School 是受益人，那 ‘sole benefactor’ 应该是 ‘sole beneficiary' 才对吧？
Bob Greens estate 该是指 Bob Green's estate 吧？